Supercrit feedback

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In the year 2057, rising sea levels has turned New Town into a swamp and Lambton Quay is a damp alley.

How will life be different in forty years?


Arron eats a quick plant based breakfast grabs his electric bike, chucks on his modulus coat and Arc-Ar glasses and heads out. Cuba St its dead these days, the cloud city is where people are now.



Student feedback:

The backgrounds and environments look very somber. Try to brighten them up, more sunlight to follow along with your message.

Arron costume - how does he bike with it. Detail the function more. What does it power. More natural poses.

Arron bike - pedals etc. give it real world wear, how does it protect the passenger.

What is the fashion period.


Tanya feedback:

How can you paint lower wellington in positive light - adaption Venice in wellington.
New complexes into landscapes.

Heritage and existing architecture.

Change lighting to reflect a positive mood.

More function in general, but don't forget the sex appeal.

Map of the area, what does the city look like.

Would there be islands, harbor towns?

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